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The Monkey, the Zebra and the Croc

10/4/2013

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Once upon a time there was a zebra named Lilly. She was the nicest zebra in the Forrest but the tease monkeys name was Mack. He was the one who teased everyone. The bad one was croc. He was the mean one because he made every one upset or said bad stuff of them.

The monkey and croc decided one day to set out and go find the elephant and make him upset. So croc planned that he will say to elephant that he is not as strong as monkey or him and monkey would say that elephant have a big bum. So they went.

So croc said “hello elephant how are you doing today? I have something nice to say to you. You will never be as strong as monkey.”

 Monkey said,  “You have a big bum bum.”

 Elephant was feeling so bad.

One day zebra past elephant and saw he was upset and then she went to ask, “What is wrong? Why are you up set?”

 “It was croc and monkey. Croc said that I would never be as strong as monkey and monkey said you have a big bum.”

So zebra went to monkey and croc and said “How would you feel if some one said something bad to you happy or upset?”

Monkey and croc apologized to elephant about all the stuff they said.

The message is: don't be mean to any one.

3 Comments
Carla
10/5/2013 07:40:33

I like your story you have a capital letters full stop

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Kenshi
10/7/2013 03:15:49

I like your story because there is message and you use a wow word.

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Alta
10/9/2013 10:00:35

Nice story with a good moral.

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